1. بدلا من الكلام المكتوب بالاحمر


2. head of admission

نظرا لقرب فتح باب الابتعاث قررت ان ازيح عنكم عناء ما عانيته في السابق
من محاولة كتابة خطاب واللذي اخذ من وقتي الكثير
وعند مقارنتي بين خطابي الاول قبل ان اذهب وخطابي هذا
شعرت فعلا بتحسن كثير كثير بالنسبه للغه لدي
لا اريد ان اطيل عليكم
هذا الخطاب جاهز لكن يلزمك ان تضع اسمك وتاريخ ميلادك ومعلومات الشهادة ومعلوماتك الخاصه

بدلا من الكلام المكتوب بالاحمر

head of admission

My name is Ali Alali. I am from Saudi Arabia. I was born on 5-NOV-1983 in Riyadh city. I am from a quite big family that consists of four brothers and four sisters. We all live in one house along with my father and mother.
When I was seven years old, I joined the elementary school named King Elementary School. I spent there six years. I after that, joined the intermediate school called Othman bin Afan for three years. When I finished the intermediate school, I started the secondary school which is called Alrodah Secondary School. I finished it within three years with an excellent grade and a general G.P.A of 91, 79 out of 100. When I was in the intermediate school, I was introduced to the computer for the first time.
At first, it was hard and I hate it, but when time passed, I started enjoying it. As long as I grow up, I become so much interested in it. When I started the high school. When I was at the last year at my high school, I came to the decision of swimming in the program as my future major. I want to be academically and educationally equipped with the information and subjects needed in this specialization to get a B.S degree. I was also dreaming to get that degree in a very well-known school as well as under the supervision of highly educated professors. One of the reasons that pushed me to study this major is that the bright future the one who owns this degree would have. For instance, in my country, the one who has a degree in computer science can easily find a job. This means that job security is in my hand once I get that degree. There is also another reason which carries quite big weight of interest. It is the community service. Finally, I hope I will be admitted at your program to get my dream comes true
Now I have a scholarship form my government. I am very enthusiastic to attend a powerful University like University of Colorado at Denver. Now I want to know what is the process you want to give me conditional admission; that is I will take language classes at language center at your university prior to enrolling at UCdenver. This means that I want get a conditional admission. If so, how can I get that.
Thank you.
My intended degree is Bachelor (B.S) in computer science.